
Love Story A Beginning
April 13, 2008There was this girl called Neha , a drop-dead gorgeous angelic beauty.. She was so charming that the charm of the glistening of the dew drops were no match .. She was so sparkling that the sparkles of the diamond pieces wondered ” oh we thought we were beautiful”.. She was so innocent that the leaves of the good old Banyan tree kept looking at her in admiration. Her smile so delicate, delicious and delightful that people ill for ages would just become alive .. her voice so enchanting engaging and enjoyable even the woods would say oh darling just speak again , we want to be immortal.
There was this guy called Rohan , an average looking but decent boy. He had all ills of a normal human being his age but had some positives to add to his resume.
The guy just saw this girl and fell in love , he had all the fears of falling in love with someone so divine and graceful, but the charm of that still image of the look he had of her in his mind was so alluring and exquisite, he just couldn’t stop himself. So within his heart , in on silent corners , he pursued this passion , this regard, this devotion, this emotion and this Love for the so very sublime creature
Times went by and then weeks , then months and years , every moment passed on as ages , one day he grabbed the courage and wrote this letter to her saying :
“Dear Princess ,
You might not be pleased to get this missive from this commoner, but this man has no option but to pray to you that be kind to him . He is so very awed by your divine and precious beauty that he cannot think of anything but you . Though what he has just done may be just too much for him but he could not stop but fall in love with you.
I pray that you accept my love or just give me permission to get free from this life as this life is nothing but a process without any purpose without you and your love “
The girl , got surprised and shocked but she replied in a graceful manner maintaining the dignity as well as the true softness of her heart.
Times passed and with some years passing by and some events happening , they both fell in love and so madly in love that they could both hear each other’s heartbeats from distances so far apart. There was so much love that even the thought of one just made the air around and warm and full of the fragrance resembling the other. The love was so strong true and pure that even from thousands of miles she kissed him and he could just feel the wetness of her lips on his . When they held hands it was like the blood from one was flowing into other just to carry the love fluid from one to another.He could see the pictures in her eyes even when she had her eyelids closed… The love was so lovely that it was just love and love and love.. It was so very beautiful that it was Love
and the love is still on and will always be there because there can be no eraser which can erase the love they have , there can be nothing that can just cut their hearts off.. one can keep their bodies away but their hearts will always be together
Amazing story Rahul….i wish every story should end up with marriage….
and thanks…
its simply amazin..love between two..platonic..no natural…so selfless..so dignified..u know wat..i wish u make ur life ur love story d way u want …all d best!!
it seems that u have been struck by cupid..:P
one is left awestruck with the way you can put across your emotions in words.. it’s absolutely amazing.. I wish the story holds true forever…
Thanks for the appreciation friends will try to do better next time
So did they like had sex or something afterwards?
@i.hate.love : mAyBe
ha bhai… In the beginning I was surprised that how come did you know about neha, the girl I told you about
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Anyways. the flow of your thoughts is very smooth and articulate. But I could not find anything concrete in the end
@pankaj : thanks
you didn’t tell me her name
anyways i will keep note of the feedback
Nice one mate.. never felt like bore anywhere in the post..
so what are ur intentions in this passage?
what do you want to tell man?
of course love is like that..!
big deal..!